Do not paste the prompt as sentence one. That is a copied introduction, not a paraphrase. Change the structure, not only two nouns: turn a statement into a general fact, then answer the instruction in sentence two. Keep names and numbers that the question needs; do not invent a synonym that flips the meaning. A two-word swap (“many people think” → “numerous individuals believe”) still reads as copy-paste and does not help Lexical Resource. You are not scored for matching the prompt’s wording. You are scored for doing the job. Practise one timed rewrite of the prompt in two sentences, then write the essay. Practice IELTS is Writing and Reading only. A four-criteria score here is a practice estimate, not an official band.
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